After 3 hours of me explaining I R A C as the way to structure an answer to a hypothetical (see previous post), the law tuition student wrote an answer to a hypothetical for me. He treated the hypo like a secondary school " write a short story beginning with the following sentence(s)." His answer CONTINUED THE STORY from the hypothetical fact pattern, introducing new characters and stuff. And the worst thing? His story sucked.

An excerpt of his answer from a hypo on offer and acceptance involving parties A, B, C, D:

" The next day, A, the offeror mets an old man at coffee shop... "